Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do We Need "Never give up" ? You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

  1.“永不言弃”一直被认为是一种积极的生活态度,是个人成功的关键因素

  2.但是,也有人认为适当的放弃才是明智的选择

  3.你对此的看法及理由

  Do We Need "Never give up"?

  【审题】本题要求写一篇议论文,属观点论证型作文。根据所给提纲,本文应包括以下内容:提出“永言不弃”的观

  提出自己的看法和理由;总结全文。
引用
  【思路一】第一段指出人们对待“永不言弃”的不同态度;
  第二段给出你对这一问题的看法及理由:需要学会适时放弃;
  第三段重申你的看法,进行总结。

  【范文一】
  Do We Need“Never give up”?
  (1)It is widely accepted that“Never give up”,a strong and positive life
  attitude,is the key for individual success on the grounds that permanent persistence may boost our confidence.strengthen our will,and provide us a second chance for success when we are in hardship.(2)However,others argue that sensible abandonment is more precious than blind persistence because the wise one should
  choose the most suitable area for himself herself.
  (3)In my opinion,we need to learn to(4)give up timely.(5)The most immediate reason is that we should adjust our aim carefully in order to go ahead continuously.Sometimes,to give up those unrealistic targets is essential for
  success.(5)Besides,the attitude“Never give up”exhausts us both mentally and
  physically.Only through learning to give up call we lead a pleasant and relaxing
  life.(5)Finally,a temporary comprise means a new start,a beginning bringing
  new hopes,expectations and opportunities for us.
  Passive as giving up sounds,(6)it represents a more mature and realistic
  mentality.If those opposing this attitude can(7)take its benefits into consideration.then this may seem acceptable m our lives.

  【点评】
  (1)开门见山,直接提出“永言不弃” 的观点
  (2)转折提出不同观点:适时放弃
  (3)提出自己的观点:学会适时放弃
  (4)主题短语:适时放弃
  (5)分三点有层次的解释说明自己的观点
  (6)学会放弃代表着一种成熟和现实
  (7)将…考虑进去


引用
  【思路二】第一段指出人们对待“永不言弃”的不同态度;
  第二段给出你对这一问题的看法及理由:对待任何事都要“永言不弃”;
  第三段重申你的看法,进行总结。

  【范文二】
  Do we need“Never give up”?
  (1)We often hear people say,“Never give up.”This can be encouraging words.A person who believes in them will(2)keep trying to reach his goal no matter how many times he fails.
  (3)In my opinion,the quality of determination to succeed is an important one
  to have.(4)One reason is that if we give up too easily,we will rarely achieve
  anything.It is not unusual for us to fail in our first attempt at something new,so we should not feel discouraged and should try again.(4)Another reason is that we can learn from our mistakes only if we make a new effort.If we do not try again,
  the lesson we have learned is wasted.(4)Finally,as we work to reach our goals,we develop confidence.and this confidence can help us succeed in other areas of our lives.
  (5)In short,it is important that we do not give up when working for our
  goals.(6)Whether we succeed in the end or not,we will learn something,and
  what we learn will help us to become better,more confident people.

  【点评】
  (1)开门见山,直接提出“永言不弃”的观点
  (2)提出不同观点:坚持
  (3)提出自己的观点:做任何事都需要“永言不弃”
  (4)分层次有条理的解释说明自己的观点,使观点更有说服力
  (5)总结全文,“永言不弃”在追求目标时很重要
  (6)选择性状语从句,主语从句及比较级的连用使句式丰富
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