1 目前很多人报考研究生

  2 我认为形成这股热潮的原因是……

  3 自拟标题  

  题目分析:  

  研究生,作为找到一份好工作的有力筹码,更是处于经济危机水深火热中毕业生们的一个热门选择,因此本文可围绕考研的种种好处以及结合经济危机进行讨论。

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The Post-graduate Craze


  Each year, millions of college students will sit in for the post-graduate entrance examination. More and more students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of their education.
  What is to account for their enthusiasm for a post-graduate diploma? First, it is the demand of the time. In an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in college can hardly meet the demand of society. Talents of high quality who are equipped with the latest knowledge and skill will be needed more than ever. That is why many students will further their studies.
  Second, we all recognize that the more education you have, the more likely you are to succeed. Compared with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for promotion and training. A post-graduate degree can guarantee a more promising career.
  Last but not least, with the graduation of a large number of college students, competition for jobs becomes more and more fierce. One way to gain some advantage over others is to have a higher degree.
  No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree.  

  样文点评:

  post-graduate entrance examination 研究生入学考试 入学考试有很多 如高考;college(or university) entrance examination  
  pursue vt 追求 名词格式 pursuit 有部电影不就叫 The Pursuit of Happyness
  当幸福来敲门  
  indispensable  
  adj. 必不可少的, 必需的,在讨论某种积极事物时候都可以用到!
  account for  
  说明〔解释〕…原因  
  an age of knowledge updating and information explosion 一个知识不断更新和信息爆炸的时代 同样,也可作为套语使用。
  preferential treatment 优惠待遇  
  No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree.
  文章点睛之笔,别嫌老土,实用拿分才是王道啊~~
  从文章结构看,首先阐明考研热现象,然后分析考研热并罗列三点原因,尾巴点睛!
  注意套语的熟练使用,此类文章层次感极为重要,要让改卷老师对你的文章结构一目了然~

  附 2008年大学英语四六级评分标准:

  33分--条理不清、思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
  39分--基本切题。表达思想不清楚连贯性差。有较多严重的语言错误。
  45分--基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
  57分--切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
  67分--切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺。连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
  文字不足酌情扣分:100-119扣1分;90-99扣3分;80-89扣4分;70-79扣5分;60-69扣6分;50-59扣7分;不足50扣9分。
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