【第一页】短文改错解析
【第二页】短文改错练习

总结前三期。

分别是 1.逻辑表达错误

         2.介词使用错误

         3.代词使用错误

3种错误类型 共30个错误。希望对大家对改错的提高有帮助。


1.逻辑表达错误



1 This is supposed to be an enlightened age, but you

wouldn’t think so if you could hear what average

man thinks of the average woman. Women won

their independence years ago. Before a long, bitter                         1.__________

struggle, they now enjoy the different educational                          2.__________

opportunities as men in most parts of the world.



2 People are earning higher wages and salaries.

This leads to the changes in the way of life. As income

goes down, people may not want more food to eat or                     3.__________

more clothes to wear. But may want more and

better care from doctors, dentists and hospitals.

They are likely to travel more and want more

education. Nevertheless, many more jobs are available                    4.__________

in these services.



3 A knowledge of several languages is essential to

other majors’ study because without them one can                         5.__________

read books only in translation.



4 If he was present because of sickness, there was                         6.__________

often no job for him when he returned.



5 Under this pressure their whole way of life, even

if their bodies, became radically changed.                                       7.__________



6 Science in itself is harmless, more or less.

But as soon as it can provide technology, it

is not necessarily harmful.                                                            8.__________



7 Then, about ten thousand years ago, when this                          9.__________

immensely long formative period of hunting for

food, they became farmers.



8 Can we be so bold as to suggest that we may be

able to colonize other planet within the not-too-                           10.__________

distant future?



2.介词使用错误




1 The year 1728 saw friction among the coffee-house                     1.__________

keepers and the publishers of newspapers.



2 The traditional nuclear family came into being a

couple of hundred years ago with the result of social                       2.__________

pressure during the shift from feudalism to industrialism.



3 Most part-time workers are women, and most part-time

women choose this work because that their domestic                      3.__________

responsibility.



4 Quality defines the difference in tone color between

a note played by different instruments or sung by                          4.__________

different voices.



5 English, which when the Anglo-Saxons first conquered

England at the fifth and sixth centuries was almost a                      5.__________

“pure” or “unmixed” language.



6 Gram soon wrote to Watson and Crick, introducing

him and presenting the first fruits of his thoughts about                 6.__________

the coding problem.



7 Man a million years ago was a little more than an

animal; but early man had several advantages to the                       7.__________

animals in that he had a large brain and an upright body.



8 Despite of the great difficulties they had, they                             8.__________

continued the work without any complaint.



9 We are fully aware of that something must be                             9.__________

done to put an end to this situation.



10 We are the same opinion that he is fit for this position.              10.__________



3.代词使用错误



1 We must find out the customs of other races, so that

it will not think us ill-mannered.                                                     1.__________


2 But the people all over the world agree that being

well-mannered really means being kind. Please

remember this, and then he will not go very far.                              2.__________


3 Scientist are discovering that sea water can be

very valuable. It has been suggested that their                               3.__________

currents can be used to make electricity.


4 While technology makes this possible for four                              4.__________

even six billion of us to exist, it also eliminates

our job opportunities.


5 Traditionally, work determines our way of life.

But if 98 percent of us don’t need to work, what

are we going to do with oneself?                                                   5.__________


6 A break in their employment, or a decision to

work part-time, will slow its raises and promotions                          6.__________

as it would for men.


7 The conscience of the nation is appeased, while

the population continues to puff their way                                      7.__________

to smoke, cancerous death.


8 There are many such differences and we shall take

up only that involving language, omitting those that do not.             8.__________


9 A wise and experienced administrator will assign

a job to whomever is best qualified.                                               9.__________


10 unconsciously, we copy these we are close to or                         10.__________

love or admire.

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