2007年12月22日大学英语六级考试流程
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最新大学英语六级考试流程
14：50---15：00试音寻台时间
15：00---15：10播放考场指令，发放作文考卷
15：10取下耳机，开始作文考试
15：35发放含有快速阅读的试题册（但15：40才允许开始做）
15：40---15：55做快速阅读部分
15：55---16：00收答题卡一（即作文和快速阅读）
15：55---16：00重新戴上耳机，试音寻台，准备听力考试
16：00开始听力考试，电台开始放音
听力结束后完成剩余考项。
17：20全部考试结束
14：50---15：00试音寻台时间
15：00---15：10播放考场指令，发放作文考卷
15：10取下耳机，开始作文考试
15：35发放含有快速阅读的试题册（但15：40才允许开始做）
15：40---15：55做快速阅读部分
15：55---16：00收答题卡一（即作文和快速阅读）
15：55---16：00重新戴上耳机，试音寻台，准备听力考试
16：00开始听力考试，电台开始放音
听力结束后完成剩余考项。
17：20全部考试结束
历年四六级听力常考习语40条
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1) take a rain check
2) lost count 弄不清楚
3) be in another world 精神恍惚；魂不守舍
4) make yourself at home 随意，随便
5) save your breath 省口气吧；别白费口舌了
6) make sense 有意义，理解
7) cost sb. an arm and a leg 非常昂贵
8) burn a hole in one's pocket 很快地被花光
9)fill one's shoes 很好地顶替；令人满意地替代
10)is ice cold 表示理所当然
11)like apples and oranges 用来表示无法相比的事物
13)lose one's train of 忘记
14)meet each other half way 相互妥协，让步
15)on the dot 准时；正点
16)once and for all 最后一次；干脆
17)out of earshot 不在听力所及范围
18)out of this world 非常好
19)play by ear 随机应变，视情形而定
20) ring a bell 令人想起某件事；听起来耳熟
21)share a common outlook 有共同的观点
22)six of one and half-a-dozen of the other 半斤八两；没什么区别
23)stick around 在附近逗留或等待
24)stick with 继续做，坚持
25)straighten out 扯平；结清
26)toss and turn (身体)翻来覆去(通常表示难以入睡)
27)turn one's back (在别人遇到困难时)不愿帮助
28)under the weather 身体不适，生病
29)bite off more than one can chew 贪多嚼不烂；心有余而力不足；不自量力；力不从心
30)break new ground 创新
31)do the trick 做成功；达到理想的结果
32)drag one's feet 行动缓慢；磨磨蹭蹭不情愿
33)draw the line 拒绝，拒不容忍
34)feel down in the dumps 心情不好；情绪低落
35)few and far between 不多；少而分散的；不常碰到或发现的；稀少的
36)fit as a fiddle 身体很健康
37)grin and bear 任劳任怨；毫无怨言地忍受
38)hit the spot (特指吃了食物，喝了饮料之后)精神完全恢复过来或感到满足；恢复精力；提精神
39)keep between the two of us 不让第三者知道，保密
40)know a thing or two about 略知一二
2) lost count 弄不清楚
3) be in another world 精神恍惚；魂不守舍
4) make yourself at home 随意，随便
5) save your breath 省口气吧；别白费口舌了
6) make sense 有意义，理解
7) cost sb. an arm and a leg 非常昂贵
8) burn a hole in one's pocket 很快地被花光
9)fill one's shoes 很好地顶替；令人满意地替代
10)is ice cold 表示理所当然
11)like apples and oranges 用来表示无法相比的事物
13)lose one's train of 忘记
14)meet each other half way 相互妥协，让步
15)on the dot 准时；正点
16)once and for all 最后一次；干脆
17)out of earshot 不在听力所及范围
18)out of this world 非常好
19)play by ear 随机应变，视情形而定
20) ring a bell 令人想起某件事；听起来耳熟
21)share a common outlook 有共同的观点
22)six of one and half-a-dozen of the other 半斤八两；没什么区别
23)stick around 在附近逗留或等待
24)stick with 继续做，坚持
25)straighten out 扯平；结清
26)toss and turn (身体)翻来覆去(通常表示难以入睡)
27)turn one's back (在别人遇到困难时)不愿帮助
28)under the weather 身体不适，生病
29)bite off more than one can chew 贪多嚼不烂；心有余而力不足；不自量力；力不从心
30)break new ground 创新
31)do the trick 做成功；达到理想的结果
32)drag one's feet 行动缓慢；磨磨蹭蹭不情愿
33)draw the line 拒绝，拒不容忍
34)feel down in the dumps 心情不好；情绪低落
35)few and far between 不多；少而分散的；不常碰到或发现的；稀少的
36)fit as a fiddle 身体很健康
37)grin and bear 任劳任怨；毫无怨言地忍受
38)hit the spot (特指吃了食物，喝了饮料之后)精神完全恢复过来或感到满足；恢复精力；提精神
39)keep between the two of us 不让第三者知道，保密
40)know a thing or two about 略知一二
英语六级备考四大攻略
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一、关于听力
在新六级听力考试中，除了传统题型短对话，短文理解，复合式听写外，有一个新题型值得大家关注：长对话。在2006年12月的新六级考试中出现了2段长对话，第一段男女之间的对话有8个轮次，后面设置了4个问题；第二段有7轮，后面设置了3个问题。从考试的情况来看，难度适中，大多数坚持听力练习的同学都能很好的适应。但相对于短对话而言，长对话信息量大大增加，如何根据选项推断出听力的内容及可能要问的问题，以及如何在纷繁复杂的对话中保持清醒的头脑，不被干扰信息所迷惑，确实也给不少同学带来了一定的难度。下面我想通过分析刚刚考过的新六级长对话来帮助大家理一下此题型的答题思路：
我希望同学们在做长对话时能先看一看后面的问题，对对话的话题以及后面将要问的问题能有一个合理的推断。什么叫合理的推断？我喜欢把推断的过程比喻成侦探破案，要善于抓住蛛丝马迹，有时可以借助逆向思维来理清自己的思路。比如第一段长对话，你能告诉我后面的4个问题是什么吗？你肯定会跟我说：除非你是命题人，否则你是不可能事先知道4道要问的问题的。我说我不是命题人，但仍然通过分析选项，按照正常人的逻辑判断出后面4道所要问的问题：
19、 A) He picked up some apples in his yard。
B) He cut some branches off the apple tree。
C) He quarreled with his neighbor over the fence。
D) He cleaned up all the garbage in the woman’s yard。
这里四个表述都在讲一个男的做了某件事情，似乎没什么头绪，先看下面的题目
20、 A) Trim the apple trees in her yard。
B) Pick up the apples that fell in her yard。
C) Take the garbage to curb for her。
D) Remove the branches from her yard。
这题应该是在说一个女的让某个人做一件事情，除了看见了有两个apple，似乎还是没有啥头绪，唉，看得头都大了，还是一无所获，有这工夫还不如啃两个苹果呢。别急，好戏在后头：
21、 A) File a lawsuit against the man
B) Ask the man for compensation。
C) Have the man’ apple tree cut down
D) Throw garbage into the man’ yard
这几个选项似乎都不大“友好”啊，你看看，又是起诉，又是要求赔偿，还要扔垃圾，我心里暗想这个老兄麻烦可大了哦。但再一想：这个女的为什么要这样呢？按照“正常人”的思路，那一定是这个男的做错了什么事她才会要求赔偿或者起诉什么的吧，而且估计是两人协商不好才会这样的。我于是在脑子里把事件再整理一下，发现思路越来越清晰了：那个男士做错了某件事影响到这个女士了，于是她就让他弥补过失，可是他不肯。不肯怎么办？这个女士就狠了：你选择吧，1我上法院起诉你2赔偿我3我把你苹果树给砍了4我把垃圾扔到你的院子里。呵呵，不好意思，开个玩笑啊。估计这哥们对这个女士的“威胁”应该有个回应吧。
我这一想不要紧，发现后面四道题果然能和我的想法对上号啊：19题应该问这个男的干了什么事；20题估计是这个女的要男的弥补他的过失；21题那应该是这位老兄不肯，女的就放狠话咯。最“可怕”的是，我连这个男的要回应女士的威胁这一点都想到了，不正好是22题嘛。暗自惊喜，恨不得马上把命题人叫到自己身边：小样，拽什么拽，我也能命题了。既然这个男的做了错事，影响了这个女士，那我们看看19题，A)C)肯定排除咯， 对于A)自己在自己家院子里拾苹果碍着谁了？至于D)他把这个女士院子里的垃圾清理了，她感谢还来不及呢，怎么会还要起诉他什么的。所以在没听听力前，我们就能将目光锁定在B)C)两项了，根据听力原文中的内容：I was calling about the apple tree that you were trimming yesterday。显然选B)。这里选项中的cut some branches off the apple tree就对应着trim the apple tree。另外一点大家要注意：分析了这篇长对话的答案与原文，发现答案项都是原文意思的同义替换，也就是说一定要真正听懂了意思才能做对题，想靠听到的只言片语就选出答案几乎是不可能的事。所以大家平时要加强听力理解的训练，练好听力真功夫，这样才能在考场上沉着应对。
20、选D)remove the branches对应着原文的some of the larger branches fell over into my yard， and I think you should come and get them。
21、选A)File a lawsuit against the man对应着原文的：Get the branches off my property or I’ll have to sue you。
22、选 C)He was not intimidated对应原文的：Yeah？ For what？ You’re taking those law classes too seriously! I’ll gotta go， I have to pick up my son。以及最后的：Yeah， yeah。 See you in court Jane。显然这位老兄是满不在乎的。而且4个选项中出现了2个相反的选项：C)He was not intimidated和D)He was a bit concerned。根据逻辑，如果选项中出现两个相反项，则正确答案必在二者之间。
第二个长对话就请同学自己分析了，这里不再讨论了。
综上，在备考新六级听力时，大家每天一定要保持一定量的听力训练，最好能进行听写练习。一句话，只有平时扎扎实实打好听力的基本功，才有可能在这项得高分。考试嘛，实力永远是第一位的，任何技巧都建立在实力的基础上。
在新六级听力考试中，除了传统题型短对话，短文理解，复合式听写外，有一个新题型值得大家关注：长对话。在2006年12月的新六级考试中出现了2段长对话，第一段男女之间的对话有8个轮次，后面设置了4个问题；第二段有7轮，后面设置了3个问题。从考试的情况来看，难度适中，大多数坚持听力练习的同学都能很好的适应。但相对于短对话而言，长对话信息量大大增加，如何根据选项推断出听力的内容及可能要问的问题，以及如何在纷繁复杂的对话中保持清醒的头脑，不被干扰信息所迷惑，确实也给不少同学带来了一定的难度。下面我想通过分析刚刚考过的新六级长对话来帮助大家理一下此题型的答题思路：
我希望同学们在做长对话时能先看一看后面的问题，对对话的话题以及后面将要问的问题能有一个合理的推断。什么叫合理的推断？我喜欢把推断的过程比喻成侦探破案，要善于抓住蛛丝马迹，有时可以借助逆向思维来理清自己的思路。比如第一段长对话，你能告诉我后面的4个问题是什么吗？你肯定会跟我说：除非你是命题人，否则你是不可能事先知道4道要问的问题的。我说我不是命题人，但仍然通过分析选项，按照正常人的逻辑判断出后面4道所要问的问题：
19、 A) He picked up some apples in his yard。
B) He cut some branches off the apple tree。
C) He quarreled with his neighbor over the fence。
D) He cleaned up all the garbage in the woman’s yard。
这里四个表述都在讲一个男的做了某件事情，似乎没什么头绪，先看下面的题目
20、 A) Trim the apple trees in her yard。
B) Pick up the apples that fell in her yard。
C) Take the garbage to curb for her。
D) Remove the branches from her yard。
这题应该是在说一个女的让某个人做一件事情，除了看见了有两个apple，似乎还是没有啥头绪，唉，看得头都大了，还是一无所获，有这工夫还不如啃两个苹果呢。别急，好戏在后头：
21、 A) File a lawsuit against the man
B) Ask the man for compensation。
C) Have the man’ apple tree cut down
D) Throw garbage into the man’ yard
这几个选项似乎都不大“友好”啊，你看看，又是起诉，又是要求赔偿，还要扔垃圾，我心里暗想这个老兄麻烦可大了哦。但再一想：这个女的为什么要这样呢？按照“正常人”的思路，那一定是这个男的做错了什么事她才会要求赔偿或者起诉什么的吧，而且估计是两人协商不好才会这样的。我于是在脑子里把事件再整理一下，发现思路越来越清晰了：那个男士做错了某件事影响到这个女士了，于是她就让他弥补过失，可是他不肯。不肯怎么办？这个女士就狠了：你选择吧，1我上法院起诉你2赔偿我3我把你苹果树给砍了4我把垃圾扔到你的院子里。呵呵，不好意思，开个玩笑啊。估计这哥们对这个女士的“威胁”应该有个回应吧。
我这一想不要紧，发现后面四道题果然能和我的想法对上号啊：19题应该问这个男的干了什么事；20题估计是这个女的要男的弥补他的过失；21题那应该是这位老兄不肯，女的就放狠话咯。最“可怕”的是，我连这个男的要回应女士的威胁这一点都想到了，不正好是22题嘛。暗自惊喜，恨不得马上把命题人叫到自己身边：小样，拽什么拽，我也能命题了。既然这个男的做了错事，影响了这个女士，那我们看看19题，A)C)肯定排除咯， 对于A)自己在自己家院子里拾苹果碍着谁了？至于D)他把这个女士院子里的垃圾清理了，她感谢还来不及呢，怎么会还要起诉他什么的。所以在没听听力前，我们就能将目光锁定在B)C)两项了，根据听力原文中的内容：I was calling about the apple tree that you were trimming yesterday。显然选B)。这里选项中的cut some branches off the apple tree就对应着trim the apple tree。另外一点大家要注意：分析了这篇长对话的答案与原文，发现答案项都是原文意思的同义替换，也就是说一定要真正听懂了意思才能做对题，想靠听到的只言片语就选出答案几乎是不可能的事。所以大家平时要加强听力理解的训练，练好听力真功夫，这样才能在考场上沉着应对。
20、选D)remove the branches对应着原文的some of the larger branches fell over into my yard， and I think you should come and get them。
21、选A)File a lawsuit against the man对应着原文的：Get the branches off my property or I’ll have to sue you。
22、选 C)He was not intimidated对应原文的：Yeah？ For what？ You’re taking those law classes too seriously! I’ll gotta go， I have to pick up my son。以及最后的：Yeah， yeah。 See you in court Jane。显然这位老兄是满不在乎的。而且4个选项中出现了2个相反的选项：C)He was not intimidated和D)He was a bit concerned。根据逻辑，如果选项中出现两个相反项，则正确答案必在二者之间。
第二个长对话就请同学自己分析了，这里不再讨论了。
综上，在备考新六级听力时，大家每天一定要保持一定量的听力训练，最好能进行听写练习。一句话，只有平时扎扎实实打好听力的基本功，才有可能在这项得高分。考试嘛，实力永远是第一位的，任何技巧都建立在实力的基础上。
英语六级写作高分原则
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07/06/14 22:15 | by admin ]
说到英语六级写作，它的要求与四级相比只是增加了一些字数，但实际上它对于词汇的难度，句子的运用技巧，文章的结构都提出了更高的要求，做题时可以用上如下的技巧：
1、多用长句，少用短句，适当加入几句结构较复杂的句子。
2、写好第一句话。这样容易给阅卷者留下一个好印象，最好能用上一个复句，里面要用上2-3个难的单词或词组。
3、结构要清晰。我建议使用四段式，第一段综述，第二、三段分述，第四段做总结，二、三段是重点。
4、多用连接性的词组或单词。如“first, second, moreover, for one thing...., for another, on the one hand...., on the other”等等。可以把它们置于段首或文中比较显著的位置，这样会使文章更具条理性。
5、注意结尾的时候要点题，把自己的观点明确说出来。
6、文章不要写得太长，这样容易引起阅卷者的反感。
7、词汇的使用上请多用六级词汇，以区别于四级。
8、如有可能，适当加上一两句名言或是谚语，以显示你见识的广博。
为了使大家有个更直观的感觉，我把自己的一篇小习作登出以供参考，主要是在行文结构方面，希望对大家备考英语六级作文有所帮助。
［题目］：How to Keep Calm In an Exam?
Anxiety is perhaps the worst problem many college students are faced with in their examinations. They just feel unable to keep their wits about them in those occasions, as a result of which they don't give full play to their abilities. How to solve this problem?
First of all, we should dispel the misgivings about the results of the exams. All of us are eager to chalk up good results in the evaluation tests.However, just remember:More haste, less speed. We should not be too mindful about the results. Take things calmly.
Furthermore, we can also adopt some concrete steps to calm ourselves. For example, we may keep our eyes closed and think of nothing for a minute or two just before starting an exam. It helps to keep a cool head and minimize nervousness. As for me, this method always works.
In the final analysis, we ought to bear in mind that calmness is essential for good performance in a test.Overcoming anxiety is not so thorny a problem if we are mentally and physically prepared.
1、多用长句，少用短句，适当加入几句结构较复杂的句子。
2、写好第一句话。这样容易给阅卷者留下一个好印象，最好能用上一个复句，里面要用上2-3个难的单词或词组。
3、结构要清晰。我建议使用四段式，第一段综述，第二、三段分述，第四段做总结，二、三段是重点。
4、多用连接性的词组或单词。如“first, second, moreover, for one thing...., for another, on the one hand...., on the other”等等。可以把它们置于段首或文中比较显著的位置，这样会使文章更具条理性。
5、注意结尾的时候要点题，把自己的观点明确说出来。
6、文章不要写得太长，这样容易引起阅卷者的反感。
7、词汇的使用上请多用六级词汇，以区别于四级。
8、如有可能，适当加上一两句名言或是谚语，以显示你见识的广博。
为了使大家有个更直观的感觉，我把自己的一篇小习作登出以供参考，主要是在行文结构方面，希望对大家备考英语六级作文有所帮助。
［题目］：How to Keep Calm In an Exam?
Anxiety is perhaps the worst problem many college students are faced with in their examinations. They just feel unable to keep their wits about them in those occasions, as a result of which they don't give full play to their abilities. How to solve this problem?
First of all, we should dispel the misgivings about the results of the exams. All of us are eager to chalk up good results in the evaluation tests.However, just remember:More haste, less speed. We should not be too mindful about the results. Take things calmly.
Furthermore, we can also adopt some concrete steps to calm ourselves. For example, we may keep our eyes closed and think of nothing for a minute or two just before starting an exam. It helps to keep a cool head and minimize nervousness. As for me, this method always works.
In the final analysis, we ought to bear in mind that calmness is essential for good performance in a test.Overcoming anxiety is not so thorny a problem if we are mentally and physically prepared.
教你如何创造作文闪光点
[ 07/06/14 22:10 | by admin ]
07/06/14 22:10 | by admin ]
作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、
词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！
高分作文标志:
1、是否长短句交叉；
2、是否会使用插入语；
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 沪江四六级 http://cet.hjenglish.com
2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I ( By Simmy )
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
Current ( currently )替换 now
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect
词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！
高分作文标志:
1、是否长短句交叉；
2、是否会使用插入语；
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 沪江四六级 http://cet.hjenglish.com
2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I ( By Simmy )
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
Current ( currently )替换 now
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect
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