英语六级写作高分原则

[晴 07/06/14 22:15 | by admin ]
     说到英语六级写作,它的要求与四级相比只是增加了一些字数,但实际上它对于词汇的难度,句子的运用技巧,文章的结构都提出了更高的要求,做题时可以用上如下的技巧: 

   1、多用长句,少用短句,适当加入几句结构较复杂的句子。 
   2、写好第一句话。这样容易给阅卷者留下一个好印象,最好能用上一个复句,里面要用上2-3个难的单词或词组。 
   3、结构要清晰。我建议使用四段式,第一段综述,第二、三段分述,第四段做总结,二、三段是重点。
   4、多用连接性的词组或单词。如“first, second, moreover, for one thing...., for another, on the one hand...., on the other”等等。可以把它们置于段首或文中比较显著的位置,这样会使文章更具条理性。 
   5、注意结尾的时候要点题,把自己的观点明确说出来。 
   6、文章不要写得太长,这样容易引起阅卷者的反感。 
   7、词汇的使用上请多用六级词汇,以区别于四级。 
   8、如有可能,适当加上一两句名言或是谚语,以显示你见识的广博。 

  为了使大家有个更直观的感觉,我把自己的一篇小习作登出以供参考,主要是在行文结构方面,希望对大家备考英语六级作文有所帮助。

   [题目]:How to Keep Calm In an Exam?    
   Anxiety is perhaps the worst problem many college students are faced with in their examinations. They just feel unable to keep their wits about them in those occasions, as a result of which they don't give full play to their abilities. How to solve this problem? 
   
   First of all,    we should dispel the misgivings about the results of the exams.    All of us are eager to chalk up good results in the evaluation tests.However,    just remember:More haste,    less speed.    We should not be too mindful about the results.   Take things calmly. 
   
   Furthermore,     we can also adopt some concrete steps to calm ourselves.    For example,    we may keep our eyes closed and think of nothing for a minute or two just before starting an exam.    It helps to keep a cool head and minimize nervousness.    As for me,    this method always works. 
   
   In the final analysis,   we ought to bear in mind that calmness is essential for good performance in a test.Overcoming anxiety is not so thorny a problem if we are mentally and physically prepared. 

教你如何创造作文闪光点

[不指定 07/06/14 22:10 | by admin ]
    作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板,和基本的语法、

词汇、句型用法之后,如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点,必定会使你的作文如虎添翼!


高分作文标志:

1、是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:

1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 沪江四六级 http://cet.hjenglish.com

2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I ( By Simmy )

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替换 very

thrilling 替换 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.

google 替换 search

an army of 替换 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular

Coincident with … 非常地道的句型,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换 With …

Advancement 替换 development

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into

Current ( currently )替换 now

Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.

Growing individuals 替换 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型, 说某事是毫不夸张的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有however作为插入语, function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )
Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ,do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象, merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect

六级短文听力四注意

[晴 07/06/14 22:04 | by admin ]
英语六级短文听力理解应试技巧4项注意

1.同做对话听力题一样,必须注意浏览选项来预测所考内容。

2.注意主题句和关联词。如果所听短文是一篇论说文,那么抓住主题句,对于理解 全文是非常关键的。

同样,抓住表示因果、转折等关系的关联词,对于整体理解全文的意思 、分清文章的层次和结构也是很重要的。

3.注意辨判细节。在听短文时,眼睛应看着所考3-4个问题的选项,如果在选项中有所听到的内容,

应立即作上记号,这很可能是考试问题的答案。这些细节主要包括数字、时间、人名、地名、组织机构名称等。

4.注意听清问题。考生可以预测问题,但决不能自作主张、自以为是地不等问题出 现就选好了答案,

一定要在听清问题后选择答案。
1. 并列结构。

这主要是指由and或or连接的几个并列成分在形式上必须保持一致.这一考点在历年六级改错中出现频率相当高,同学们要给予相当的重视.


(1) At the heart of the NEA survey is the belief in(改成that,同位语从句)our democratic system depends on leaders who can think critically, analyze texts and writing clearly.(07年1月新六级改错第6题)这里的writing显然与think和analyze并列,因此应该用同样的形式,所以应该改成write.

(2) Their experiments have shown that reading disorders are most likely the result of what is, in an effect(去掉an,固定介词搭配),faulty wiring in the brain-----not lazy, stupidity or a poor home environment .( 06年6月六级改错第4题)这里的lazy应该与stupidity和a poor home environment并列,因此该用名词形式laziness.

(3) Restrict yourself to one or two pages, and listing any publications or referees on a separate sheet.(06年1月六级改错第7题)通过and将restrict和listing联系起来表示并列关系,所以listing应该用原形list.

(4) How do you know how to act in a classroom,

or a department store, or toward a person who

smiles or laugh at you?(04年6月六级改错第9题)

这里的smiles和laugh肯定应该用同样的形式,而前面的

a person又提示我们该使用第三人称单数,所以将laugh改成laughs.

(5)Most experts believe this can continue even as

if(去掉as,这里的even if表示即使)the population doubles by the mid-21st century, although feeding

10 billion people will not be easy for politics,

economic and environmental reasons.(04年1月六级改错第6题)同样,这里的politics应该改成political和

economic, environmental并列。

(6)Elsewhere, rice experts in the Philippines are

producing a plant with few stems and more seeds.

(04年1月六级改错第9题)few应该与more形成对应,所以应改成比较级形式fewer.




2.A--A型错误。

所谓A--A型错误,就是指六级改错命题经常将形容词(adjective)与副词(adverb)混淆.这时我们的任务就是将文中的形容词换成它的副词形式,或将副词换成形容词:


(1)Science should not only be“fun”in the same way

as playing a video game, but “hard fun”----a deep

feeling of connection made possibly only by

imaginative engagement.(07年1月老六级改错第10题)我们都知道make sth possible, possible做为宾语补足语,那用被动语态就是sth be made possible,所以这里的possibly应该改成possible.

(2)Mass literacy is a relative new social goal.(06年6月六级改错第九题)显然这里表示“相对地”意思,因此要将relative改成它的副词形式relatively.注意:relative改成relatively不是第一次出现了,在04年1月的改错题中也出现过。

(3)A good CV is your passport to an interview and,

ultimate, to the job you want.(06年1月六级改错第二题) ultimate在两个逗号之间,肯定得用副词形式ultimately.

(4)She says efforts are continuing to complete end

the disease.(05年1月六级改错第三题)complete要改成副词形式completely修饰动词end。

(5)The WHO has given multi-drug therapy to patients

freely for the last five years.(05年1月六级改错第九题)可以看出这里freely想表示“免费的”意思,所以应该改成形容词形式free.

(5)Culture is essentially to our humanness.(04年6月六级改错第8题)be essential to是一个固定搭配,表示“对...

很重要”,所以essentially应该换成形容词essential.

(6)Except for relative-isolated trouble spots like pres-

ent-day Somalia…(04年1月第三题)显然应该用副词relatively来修饰动词过去分词isolated,表示“相对隔绝的”。

注意:A--A题错误有一种变体题型A—N.所谓A—N题型,

就是指A(adjective)与N(noun)之间的混淆,举例如下:

(1)Now what started in schools across the country is

playing itself out on a nation stage and is possibly

having an impact on the reading habits of the Ameri-

can public.(07年1月新六级第十题)“在国内舞台”应该是on a national stage,在这里名词nation要改成它的形容词形式national。

(2)Understanding the original of the negative attit-

udes towards science may help us to modify them.

(07年1月老六级第四题)表示“起源”显然要用名词形式

origin,这里用形容词original是错误的。
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遗传话题范文:

范文一:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Nature or Nurture. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
1. 有些人认为遗传因素起决定作用
2. 也有人认为环境影响作用更大
3. 你的观点


Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily determined by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance of inherited characteristics more than ever before. Yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual's personality and development are more influenced by genetic  factors (nature) or by the environment (nurture).

Research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual's life. But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development. It seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.

My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person's life. Instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the situation and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting. It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops. If this were not true, we would be able to predict the behavior and character of a person from the moment they were born. In conclusion, I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects.




奥运话题范文:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a speech in support of the 2008 Olympic Games in the name of the student union. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 奥运会即将于明年在北京
2. 举行奥运会的重大意义
3. 我们应该为奥运做些什么


Dear Friends, Fellow classmates,

The exciting moment, I am convinced, must remain vivid in our mind, when Beijing, the Capital of China, was proclaimed  the final winner to host the Olympic Games in 2008 by Chairman of the International Olympic Committee. Time flies, and the new Olympics is coming very soon!

Olympic Games, held every four years, boast a long history and offer rare opportunities for different nations to get together, which are far more than sports contests participated by professional athletes. Through Olympics, new world records are set, resilient sportsmanship is highlighted, sport-related industries spring up and international goodwill and exchange get greatly enhanced.

As college students, we ought to contribute our share to the imminent Olympic Games with responsibility of citizenship as well as focused knowledge. For instance, it is advisable to give voluntary lectures to popularize  Olympic knowledge and environmental awareness in some residential areas. And we are looking forward to your suggestions and participation!

Student Union

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